Writing practice: The Sunset in Sanya Bay

I took Independent Writing class this quarter, and I love this paragraph I wrote for the homework. 

The sunset in Sanya Bay, 2008

Sanya Bay, one of the most beautiful bays in China, is located in Hainan Island which is the southernmost province of China. Although the sea and beach are almost the same in the world, the sunset in Sanya Bay is the most valuable scenery to view. The shining color of the setting sun is reflected on the clouds and the sea. Pieces of clouds which linger around the sun have different yellow colors. Surrounded by bright yellow, the sun is like an egg yolk. Golden yellow frames the clouds, while the clouds are orange because of the sunlight reflection. Shading from orange, pink, purple, blue, to dark blue, the sky is just like a special curtain which is ready for the coming night party. Most people feel cheerful and relaxed when they are watching those amazing colors. At this time of the day, the sea presents dark blue except a saffron sunbeam; the color makes people warm and calm. With feeling the soft wind against face and hearing the gentle growl of the waves, it seems that the sea has stories to tell tonight. The salty but sweet sea smell is a gift to strollers, who like to go walking on the beach after dinner while enjoy the amazing sunset. In addition, the white sands along the beach are enjoyable; even if people walk on it without shoes, they feel great softness. Young couples walk hand in hand. Kids scream and run while their parents shout at them. Elder people seldom walk on the beach at dusk because it is windy when the sun sets. Owing to the weather is a little cold at this time of the day, few people swim or surf. Relatively, Sanya Bay is quieter than other bays in Hainan. Moreover, people will not miss the signature food, seafood barbecue. On the opposite side of the beach, there are many barbecue restaurants which sell and grill fresh seafood. The smell is all along the seaside street, and it is too tantalizing to resist. In conclusion, a feeling of happiness and satisfaction occupy the whole heart when people watch sunset and enjoy seafood barbecue in Sanya Bay.